Four Pigeons
by John Stupp
Four pigeons
flew over Pittsburgh
like a single organism
this morning
in December
with wings
and neck feathers
of great beauty
like gulls
over the Greek fleet
at Salamis
as recorded by Herodotus
no one noticed
but me
listening to Kenny Clarke
and looking out the window
I should have been working
my boss said
oh great city of Pittsburgh
city of bosses and pigeons and jazz
I will write about you
and about the Ohio River
which I discovered
like a lost child
on my lunch hour
_____
John Stupp’s third poetry collection Pawleys Island was published in 2017 by Finishing Line Press. His manuscript Summer Job won the 2017 Cathy Smith Bowers Poetry Prize and will be published in 2018 by Main Street Rag. He lives near Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania. From 1975-1985 he worked professionally as a mediocre jazz guitarist.
wonderful poems
Really liked Newell’s ‘Sketches of Spain’, a really strong haiku-variation.
Really liked Newell’s ‘Sketches of Spain’, a really strong haiku-variation.
Love this poem, very descriptive.
Love this poem, very descriptive.
I like this poem, What Billie Sang About, it’s very inspiring.
Thank you, Judy.
I like this poem, What Billie Sang About, it’s very inspiring.
Thank you, Judy.
I clearly visualize Spain’s intensely blue skies in “Sketches of Spain.” The last line of that poem is stunning–doing exactly what powerful music does–opens the soul. I look forward to reading your forthcoming book of poems.
I clearly visualize Spain’s intensely blue skies in “Sketches of Spain.” The last line of that poem is stunning–doing exactly what powerful music does–opens the soul. I look forward to reading your forthcoming book of poems.
“Pure Vinyl” is a good poem about one of my favorite albums, Two of a Mind. Well-done. It is a pleasure to see Mulligan and Desmond given their considerable due. I wore out my vinyl copy years ago.
“Pure Vinyl” is a good poem about one of my favorite albums, Two of a Mind. Well-done. It is a pleasure to see Mulligan and Desmond given their considerable due. I wore out my vinyl copy years ago.
Thanks Michael. I have both the vinyl and the CD. Your three short poems are great. Your contributions wonderful.
“Motion (for Elvin Jones)”: It is a pleasure to see one of the often ignored greats being given his due, a smoking hot drummer being honored with appropriate language. Way cool.
“Motion (for Elvin Jones)”: It is a pleasure to see one of the often ignored greats being given his due, a smoking hot drummer being honored with appropriate language. Way cool.
“Revelation” is good work. The final two stanzas are outstanding. They raise the hair on the back of my neck.
Revelation is good work. The final two stanzas are outstanding. They raise the hair on the back of my neck.
Dan Smith’s poem is very cool with a humorous bite in its closing lines. A good poem for oral presentation.
Dan Smith’s poem is very cool with a humorous bite in its closing lines. A good poem for oral presentation.
Dear Mr. Newell:
So glad that you liked my poem. I plan to add this to either my jazz poems set or my Cleveland Suite with The Deep Cleveland Trio.
I greatly enjoy John Stupp’s poem, “Four Pigeons” — I can envision Carl Sandburg reading it and bestowing his blessing on such fine work.
I greatly enjoy John Stupp’s poem, “Four Pigeons” — I can envision Carl Sandburg reading it and bestowing his blessing on such fine work.
Thanks for the kind words Michael. I’m just a sideman in this band. There’s a lot of good poems here.
“What Billie Sang About” is a poem that touches the heart, and summons up a jazz giant in all her pain and musical power. One can feel the empathy the poet has for the singer.
“What Billie Sang About” is a poem that touches the heart, and summons up a jazz giant in all her pain and musical power. One can feel the empathy the poet has for the singer.
Roger Singer’s “Release” captures admirably the pain, grief, and loss that has filled the work of so many jazz artists over the past century. Powerful work.
Roger Singer’s “Release” captures admirably the pain, grief, and loss that has filled the work of so many jazz artists over the past century. Powerful work.
So proud to publish such talented poets, and to see a community develop. I am very grateful to all writers who think enough of Jerry Jazz Musician to submit work for consideration.
So proud to publish such talented poets, and to see a community develop. I am very grateful to all writers who think enough of Jerry Jazz Musician to submit work for consideration.
All of the poems had some great poetic technique. I enjoyed them all. For Michael Newell. All the poems you have had in JJM, I have liked very much. You have a way of creating imagery, that really stays in the mind.
All of the poems had some great poetic technique. I enjoyed them all. For Michael Newell. All the poems you have had in JJM, I have liked very much. You have a way of creating imagery, that really stays in the mind.